Writing Tips Part 2

 

Narration

Mood - Is the land chaotic? Peaceful? Undisturbed? Destroyed? Barely hanging-on? Trying to survive? Being rebuilt? Being built with new construction? Is the land under attack? Are there unexpected guests? Is it the chief town? Is it the poorest town? Criminal? Lawful? Independant? 

For narration use verb phrases to describe locations such as: Tamed woodlands, hunting grounds, secret places, loading bays, strong cities.

For narration use verb phrases to describe people such as: Nationalist-minded peoples.

For narration use verb phrases to describe actions such as: Napoleon overextended his lines.

Is it helpfull?